Sunday, December 27, 2009

Look Behind



Look behind I am still standing there
Look behind I am still waiting

To be again the part of thy life
To be again the shadow of thy soul

So much lost and so much gained
So many thoughts left unexplained

Not every wish comes true
Not every hope fulfilled

Yet every night I dream the same
Of you and I, a happy frame

Look behind I am still standing there
Look behind I am still waiting

To be the one you choose
To be the one you love

I do not promise a bed of roses
But I shall hold thy hand through thorns
I do not promise a fairy tale
But I will not let our love fail

I was your past
I can be your future

All I need is a chance from you
To drive away thy pain and blues

Just take a step forward
And I shall cover all the miles
Just take a step forward
And there shall be no lies

All you have to do is…
Look behind.

7 Comments:

Leo said...

i LOVED it.. :) i'd look behind if it was meant for me, it was that passionate a write... kudos Tweety, u still got that flair.. keep writing and develop it more :D

An Ordinary Gal said...

very nicely expressed...loved it
keep writing :)

♪PŕİиСεSS ΝuCĥụ♪ said...

"I do not promise a bed of roses
But I shall hold thy hand through thorns"

Wonderful lines :)))

~PakKaramu~ said...

Happy new year to you

Raj said...

expressive.. passionate.. and a treat.. what more i can say..

Just seemed like my story.. and inspired some lines .. Let me write them here.

i wish she looked behind,
i wish i was on her mind,
i wish god was-a-bit more kind,
I wish life had a rewind,
I wish she looked behind..

These lines came to my mind when i read it.. You poem inspires poetry tweety.. So i think that would be one of the best compliments you would have got..

U are good.. Keep writing.. And may be some years later we all here would be in line for the "author-signed" copy of your bestseller..

:-)..

Stay happy.. c ya..

Haresh said...

A nice one.

This reminds me of four lines of a ghazal which goes like...

Fir wahi shaam hain fir wahi root chhayi hain,
Firse palkonmein yaadon ki boondein bhar aayi hain;
Aaj bhi wahi raahon me hum khade hain jahaan tum chhod gayi thi,
Na jaane kahan kho gaya hoon main, bas bachi ek parchhai hain.

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